The House Of Immortality
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Re: The House Of Immortality
In that world, nothing will happen. I could promise you that. PLus with me there, i'm pretty sure everything will go smoothly
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Hehe, you haven't met my sister ^_^" Wait a sec! O.O I-I didn't mean that in a bad way because Elsa's good, it's just that, uhh, sh-she doesn't mean to, but sometimes things happen and she can't control and, well, no offense but I don't think you being there is going to garuntee that nothing goes wrong. B-But we can at least hope thatnothing goes wrong, right? I mean, nothing should go wrong because Elsa's going to be happy, not scared - maybe - so, uh, yeah... It- It will be alright, I'm sure. We just might have to be a bit cautious of how Elsa's reacting to it all.
Off to lesson! Bye!
Off to lesson! Bye!
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vaii
She is your sister and you do know more then I do. So, lets hope for the best.
She is your sister and you do know more then I do. So, lets hope for the best.
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Well tomorrow is going to be very interesting! XD So Sainsburys had everything I needed... Except the salmon. So I asked her what could go well in prosicuto or whatever it is, and she told me cod did, so I bought two fillets of them and she gave me this butter to put in the roux. I'm gonna have to change my coursework accordingly but I'm excited for this! XD
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Oh, I have a cooking exam tomorrow and I kept forgetting to tell mum so I just went and got the ingredients myself aha.
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It sounds like you make great stuff in cooking. All we ever did was fruits salads and sausage rolls and... Well, we did do stir fry at one point but that was really about it as far as real meals went :/
*Sighs, mumuring.* I wish I knew her better than you. *Realises she said it out loud and mentally kicks herself.* A-Anyway, I better get dressed properly, and get breakfast. I-I mean lunch; it is lunchtime, right? I need to get some sort if food anyway, so, yeah, I'll see you later, Blade ^_^ *Closes the door again and starts searching around for her bodice and her socks and boots.*
*Sighs, mumuring.* I wish I knew her better than you. *Realises she said it out loud and mentally kicks herself.* A-Anyway, I better get dressed properly, and get breakfast. I-I mean lunch; it is lunchtime, right? I need to get some sort if food anyway, so, yeah, I'll see you later, Blade ^_^ *Closes the door again and starts searching around for her bodice and her socks and boots.*
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Oh boy.
I typed in 'Nordic bodice' and a picture of Anna's bodice came up. *Facepalms.* Shopping for Anna is not going well.
I typed in 'Nordic bodice' and a picture of Anna's bodice came up. *Facepalms.* Shopping for Anna is not going well.
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Lol, it's only cause it's GCSE, we did that kind of stuff in like, years 7-9
I found a pic of how Chloe and Callum's flat is laid out, doesn't have any furniture in though :/
I found a pic of how Chloe and Callum's flat is laid out, doesn't have any furniture in though :/
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Cool!
And oh yeah, I stopped cooking after year 9, that'll be why I didn't do anything fancy XD
And oh yeah, I stopped cooking after year 9, that'll be why I didn't do anything fancy XD
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*Comes downstairs, heading towards the kitchen.* You're a pain to shop for, you know that? *Pauses and looks over to Wolfie.* Yeah well most of my stuff was made by the royal tailor, so you're not exactly going to find my style in the local stores. *Mumbles.* Yeah, and you're not going to find them in this century either -_- *Doesn't hear Wolfie, but a growling noise from her stomach stops her from asking and she just heads straight into the kitchen to get food.*
Trolololol, Youtube comments:
A: I just don't get why Anna couldn't go out of the castle. She didn't have any memories of Elsa's magic, so she couldn't tell anyone...
B: You saw Anna during the song. In the space of a minute and thirty seconds, she manages to trash part of the castle. The people who kept her in were smart, holding that whirlwind of destruction inside the castle.
So true! XD
Trolololol, Youtube comments:
A: I just don't get why Anna couldn't go out of the castle. She didn't have any memories of Elsa's magic, so she couldn't tell anyone...
B: You saw Anna during the song. In the space of a minute and thirty seconds, she manages to trash part of the castle. The people who kept her in were smart, holding that whirlwind of destruction inside the castle.
So true! XD
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Lol XD
Por girl xD I have to make choux buns too since it's a 2 course meal. I have 2 hours and Megan's doing it tomorrow too, I'm actually looking forward to it! :3 Despite not ever cooking fish before XD
Por girl xD I have to make choux buns too since it's a 2 course meal. I have 2 hours and Megan's doing it tomorrow too, I'm actually looking forward to it! :3 Despite not ever cooking fish before XD
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It sounds like fun Good luck! *Walks back in, having finished eating, and settles down on the couch.* Hey there! What's the conversation topic.* Food and making food. Oh no, don't make me hungry again! DX Hehehe >:3
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I'm not the only one who picked up on this! Yay! My theory is that Anna was afraid to face rejection again, which was why she hesitated when she had to knock on the door. O.o Ok, I know about the ice palace, but who's Kristoff, who's Olaf and I haven't even visited the ice palace yet, so how is this possible? Gah! Spoilers! DX Why are you always here?! O.O I thought you liked me being here. Not right now! DX
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I picked up on that as well! X3
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But this... I haven't even gone to see Elsa yet, and I don't know a Kristoff and an Olaf! And you haven't gone to visit Elsa because you're scared of being told to go away again, right? ... It doesn't matter, anyway, Elsa comes to visit me here, so there's no need for me to knock on her door. Aww! Anna! *Huggles.*
Anyway, almost done with the fanfic. I have another idea too, but I'll do that one tomorrow or something.
Anyway, almost done with the fanfic. I have another idea too, but I'll do that one tomorrow or something.
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- Smores (Elsa and Anna fanfic):
- Winter in Arendelle was unforgivably cold this year. Thick layers of snow covered every house, every street, every bridge, in its freezing cold blanket, fountains had been turned to ice statues, icicles hung precariously along the edges of roofs like see-through daggers and the air was certainly below freezing, causing breath to come out in wisps of visible vapour. Not even the royal family were prepared for such weather, meaning that many were wearing their cloaks inside – an act permitted by the king himself, to prevent anyone literally freezing to death.
Despite this rather dark, miserable night, however, the royal family tried to make the most of it, as the king and queen had a rare and precious evening free of work, one of which they intended to spend with their youngest daughter of 6, Anna. At the request of the young princess, who longed for something fun to do since the rest of her day had been rather dull with no one to play with – her older, 9 year old sister, Elsa, had locked herself away in her room a year ago and had yet to come out, despite young Anna’s pleas -, the royal family sat in the library in front of the fireplace, blankets wrapped around them as they made smores.
They were all having fun and Anna’s mouth was covered in chocolatey-marshmallowy goodness, but that changed soon after the queen wiped the mess from her daughter’s face, the strawberry-blonde little princess looking to the space beside her, where Elsa should be. Why couldn’t Elsa spend time with the family? Why did she always have to miss out on the fun? Why wouldn’t she ever play with Anna anymore? Anna always asked, but no one ever really answered, so this time she decided to change tactics.
“Mama, Papa, can I take a smore to Elsa, please?” Big blue pleading eyes gazed at her parents, who both exchanged a look which Anna would come to understand in the distant future as the look of someone with a secret, a sad, scary secret, and after what seemed like forever to the young child, her father addressed her with a sad smile.
“Leave it outside her room, Anna, but don’t go in; it would be best not to disturb your sister.” Despite the soft words, the tone was more commanding, not even giving Anna a chance to at least peek into Elsa’s room. Frowning slightly, the little princess nodded, taking a napkin and a smore and heading upstairs towards Elsa’s room.
The further away Anna got from the warm fire of the library, and the closer she got to her sister’s room, the colder it got. Her blanket left behind, goose bumps crawled up Anna’s arms, though she tried to ignore it, because she had to give the smore to Elsa, so that she could feel like being a part of the fun too (and maybe her sister would answer some of Anna’s questions). Eventually the princess got to the big white door, adorned with paintings of simple blue flowers and took a deep breath, knocking on the door which seemed to be even colder than the air around her with her usual, rhythmic ‘Dun, dun, da-dun, dun’ tapping.
“Elsa? I brought you a smore! Papa said to leave it outside though, so I’m gonna do that, ok?” No response, though there was a slight shuffling noise of someone moving about and, after hearing dead silence for at least a week now, that tiny sound itself brought a beam to Anna’s face as she carefully set the smore down on the napkin outside the bedroom door. “We’re camping in the library, Elsa! Well, not really because we don’t have any tents, but we have blankets, and smores and the fireplace is kinda like a camp fire.” Anna sat on the floor, just outside the door, hugging her knees to her chest as she attempted a conversation with Elsa, who must’ve been just as lonely as she was. Remember when we went camping that one time and I pushed you into the lake and your dress got all wet? And then you pulled me in for laugh at you?” Was that giggling Anna could hear? The little girl’s grin brightened, glad to hear her sister laughing and being happy instead of telling her to go away like she usually did. “That day was fun! We got into trouble a little but it was worth it!”
Silence enveloped both girls for a moment, and Anna was worried that her sister had fallen asleep or something, but she still tried to ask questions anyway.
“… Elsa? Why can’t we have fun anymore?” No answer, and if Anna was paying attention to the top of the door, she would’ve seen frost start forming on it, but instead, she just stared at the wood that was directly in her line of gaze, trying to imagine Elsa on the other side. “Why won’t you come out and play with me? I promise I won’t tug on your doll’s hair anymore, or steal your paint! I just want us to be friends again.” And now the laughter had been replaced by sniffles on the other side of the door and Anna’s face fell as she realised that her questions had made her older sister sad, which was the last thing she wanted. “I’m sorry, Elsa, I just mi-“
A yawn broke into Anna’s sentence. Rubbing her eyes which were suddenly starting to close, Anna gave in. Maybe she could try to set things right tomorrow, when her brain wasn’t trying to tell her to go to sleep. “I’m gonna go to bed now, Elsa. Don’t forget your smore’s out here. If you don’t eat it soon, Kai might think you don’t want it and take it away. Goodnight.”
Her feet dragged against the floor as she moved towards her own bedroom, just down the hall from Elsa’s, tiredness slowly taking over her little body. By the time she had clambered into her bed, without even saying goodnight to her mother and father, Anna was sound asleep, curled up underneath the covers, as well as several blankets, cuddling her doll to her chest.
The next morning, as Anna emerged from her room and began running down the hall, intent on having a yummy, warm breakfast on a cold winter’s day, the young princess slipped on something by Elsa’s door, sending her skidding down the hall until the lack of balance caused her to topple over, landing flat on her face with an, “Oomf!” Princess Anna didn’t start crying like normal 6 year olds would, however. Instead, she just sat up, rubbing her face with a wince before staring down curiously at the piece of paper she had slipped on. Picking it up, she studied the words written on it:
‘Thank you ~ Elsa ~’
A glance to the big white door showed that the smore had vanished. Elsa had eaten it! And given Anna a note! That was the most progress she had ever made! A smile to rival the Cheshire cat’s spread across Anna’s tiny features and she got up, running back towards Elsa’s door. Knocking once more, she said, “You’re welcome, Elsa!” through the keyhole before making her way downstairs to breakfast again.
Despite the winter weather being cold and grey, Anna was filled with warmth and brightness for the rest of the day, all because of three little words on a piece of paper.
Constructive criticism wanted, because this isn't the only one I'm gonna do, so if I've screwed up somewhere, I want to know!
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It's really good, just a small change in the 7th paragragh, you need an opening speechmark at one point I think it was abour 3/4 of the way through, and laugh should be laughing I do believe
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Ok, thanks
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No problem :3 It's cute :3
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That was the intention XD The next one's gonna be their dad lying to a royal dignitary about Elsa being ill and Anna genuinely believing it and making Elsa a 'Get well soon' card. *Shrugs.*
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Ah! So much hype from Gavin and another friend of mine over this fanfic! And a lot of hype from me, obviously But it's not even that good, so why are people so excited?!
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Lmao XD That reminds me, I still haven't done the epilogue for my jaccup fanfic DX I wanna write another but not as long XD
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Just do a one-shot. That's what mine are gonna be, little one-shots :3 So there's going to be more stories about Elsa and I? In theory Great! I can't wait
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